Djoresh's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emerald Phoenix]

Amazing, I have been looking at it for several minutes and I am still very impressed by all the details. The phoenix looks also very cool and the city gives it a great fantasy setting.

I am curious about the little orb, is there something special about it? Is that his eye that rolled out of it's socket?

Anyway, it turned out great. Challenge accomplished I'd say ;)

coltybah responds:

I'm glad you like it, it was fun to make. Since the phoenix is newly born I wanted to make it look like a little baby bird.

The orb is in fact a phoenix eye, it is symbolic of its past life, also take into account that the ash pile is shaped like an upside-down bird, a shadow of the creature's former self, now just literally dust in the wind.

[hurt]

You pictured the hurt really well. He must feel allot of pain from the inside.

linda-mota responds:

[Nine Inch Nails playing in the distance]

[Hideaki]

Nice one!

CuteNikeChan responds:

Thank you! ♥

[oldvnew]

You depicted the battle very well, I especially like the colouring and the surrounding.

cocolongo responds:

Thank you ! I am glad you liked it and took the time to comment.

[Tai Yagami]

Nicely done, I really like how you made the water

Kayllum responds:

Thank you ^_^

[Hatsune Miku Fanart [Vocaloid]]

Looks good again, I like how you made the eyes.

I don't see what's not good at your colouring, it's soft and subtle. It gives it a cute appearance. Or do you mean the shading?

I notice you make allot of your drawings the same way, I am not saying it's bad, absolutely not. But maybe it's an idea to challenge yourself to do something a little different, since you are good at these already.

ShayInator responds:

Yeah, for now I've just been using art as a stress reliever, but I do agree, I should challenge myself more! I guess I am just afraid of failing, but hey, you won't get better unless you fail! Thank you for the advice! <3

[Pocket Monsters]

Nice work on this one, nostalgia kicked in for me.

I love the colours you used and the blocky lineart.

One question, why is Ivysaur not a bulbasaur, since you did a charmander and squirtle.

ultimatemaverickx responds:

That's bulbasaur actually...

Thanks though! :)

[The Faerie King]

Whatever that strix is whispering, it makes the fairy king looking way to excited into my direction.

I love it

gavinvalentine responds:

haha thanks EmeraldPhoenix. The Faerie King knows everything that happens in his woods. =)

[mathilda (leon)]

Great job on the shading, I love the contrast between light and dark. This painted realistic style is one of my favorites.

(in my opinion, It's great to see you make something else then erotic girls/boys).

nitrile responds:

i don't want to be recognized as a hentai artist. i just want to be recognized as a good artist in general.

[soul breaker ch1 pg 1]

Really nice, I like the concept.
Good job on the futuristic look of a big crowded city, the outfits look great.

Just something I wondered, if the cube gets absorbed if anyone touches it, how come nobody else has absorbed it before?

Keep thinking of how the viewer reads, try to guide the viewer trough the page. I started reading with: 'As valued citizen... others want' instead of the first panel. My view was forced up to the page to drop down again. Imagine the first panel in the upper left corner, it creates a more pleasant view.

For action scenes, this set up would be really good, like if some attacker stands above the protagonist from above, for example.

Looks great, looking forward to the next one.

cziczak responds:

ofcourse - anyone can't absorb a cube. only certain people can.

and thank u for all suggests (: