Djoresh's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nashetania - Rokka no yuusha #day2]

Nice, I like how you stacked this drawing on the previous one, since it's a speeddraw how long did this one take?

also...: YOU MUST DRAW MORE OFTEN AND POST MORE REGULARLY OR A CUTE HAMSTER WITH FLUFFY CHEEKS WILL FALL OUT OF A TREE!

keep it up ;)

NSMP responds:

it wasn't a speeddraw hehe, that's the name of the previous character "Flamie/Fremy Speeddraw" ^^

but thanks once again! Appreciated :D

[Subtle portrait]

This is beautifull, nothing wrong with it.
1 thing is bothering me though. what is the black under her eyelashes?

NSMP responds:

I remember I tried some effect but since it this was made quite some years ago I don't even recall what i was trying, it looks awful! thanks for pointing it out though I had completely forgotten about it. hehe

[Flamie/Fremy Speeddraw]

yell at you? sure!

YOU MUST DRAW MORE OFTEN AND POST MORE REGULARLY OR A TINY FLUFFY RABBIT WITH CUTE EYES WILL CRY!

I like the drawing of Flamie, she is my favorite character of Rokka braves of the six flowers. I figured out who the 7th is, 6 marks are the same 1 is mirrored.

anyway... how long did this illustration take. Will you do Nachetanya as well?

NSMP responds:

please yell at me more! haha I really need the motivation xD

seriously? One is mirrored? man I can't wait to figure out who it is!

and I wasn't even thinking about doing nachetanya but since you got it into my head I'll do it asap!

Thank you and have a wonderful day! :3

[No Fly Zone!]

Great illustration ! I love the colours the perspective. It does not need any explanation it's great.

If I may ask, what road did you follow to get to this point of artistic skill?

JoshSummana responds:

Hey thanks for the comment! Really appreciated it! I am not sure if I am the best to ask about how to progress as I am still learning myself. But the best thing I can advise is to just draw what you love, and practice regularly. Do a lot of studies and try drawing from imagination to re-enforce the studies you do. It does take time but you will naturally get better :). If you find it easy, you're not studying the right thing! :)

[ERROR 404: No Fucks Found]

It's still a decent illustration if you ask me. I like the titel.

NullBoss responds:

That's very nice of you, cheers.

[Dark Lord]

Really nice, I like the design of the head. Though I don't really feel like he deserves the titel of a lord.
Maybe with some accessories or tatoes that signifies him as a lord.

But nothing beside that, good job!

I like the subtle blue to contrast with the red

NullMotion responds:

Thank you very much! ^_^
Yeah, i agree with you on that one, but to be honest, i wasn't really sure what to call him...

[The Vigorous]

Looks nice, I would personally switch the position order to make it visually more interresting. there are strong contrasts now.

I think I would make it: Arq - Astron - Mutt -Calor (Mirrored) -Gua - Trak

Like the idea, keep it up

Xephio responds:

Thanks. Interesting idea. Calor mirrored would indeed work better as it would create a more symmetrical composition.

[Fox]

Well I agree, the background is what it is. But the rest looks good.

The folds of the clothes seem to be abit out of place at some points.

The tree seems unnatural, the branches are horizontal. The branches of a tree grow abit upwards to carry more weight.

Keep in mind where you want the viewers eye to be guided to, the tree are like staight lines that cut the page in half. With some more curvey branches and sidebranches it would feel a little more smooth in my opinion

(But thats just me, I am still learning allot myself, so...)

I love the charcater design, and the little details. Good job on the bird as well.

keep it up!

graskip responds:

Now that I look at it, I should've probably did some study before drawing the background. The more I look at it, the worse it looks. The same goes for the tree.

Anyway, thanks for the review, all this advice is really helpful. I hope I'll make good use of it in the future.

[FOR THE HORDE]

Really good. I am curious what he is looking at that makes him look like that

SimonT responds:

Thanks! Haha, that's a question :D

[Power]

Really good, love everthing about this piece.
Will you participate in this CoTM as well?

SimonT responds:

Thank you!
I won't, don't want to compete with others when I've already won. But I am still exited what are you guys gonna make up :)