Djoresh's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ame]

Nice colours and I love the expression of the face. The eyes really capture me.

I wonder if the light isn't abit to strong for a rainy day, or is there a single rainclound following her while it's sunny around her? The shadow of the umbrella seems abit to strong to me. (I likewhat you did with the shadow of the lantern overlapping the umbrella's, I would not have tought of that).

About the hair it seems like she has a pretty flat head, even if it's wet (but what does the umbrella do then?)

I love how you did the anatomie, the hands and feet look great and I love the details you put to the knees.

Toshi13go responds:

Thank you for your review! I was trying to depict a night scene, but if it seemed like it was daytime i guess i didn't show that clearly X')

I see what you mean by that. Yeah, she is still getting hit by the rain, in my mind she doesn't care about getting wet by the rain too much and she just stuck it on there kinda like an accessory? or maybe it just keeps falling out of place and its in a situation where she has to keep adjusting it or something I don't know! x) But that kind of was on purpose :)

Thank you! and thanks again for your review!