Djoresh's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Forest elf]

Right... a 'warm up'....

(Looking sadly at own creations)

Anyway, you clearly know what you are doing. Good use of colour, dynamics, lighting. This is a powerfull illustration because of them.

well done!

(looking sadly at own illustrations again)

[Moonstone]

Still much better then any rock I can produce, but I feel like something is off here. Maybe to much or to strong grey tones? Maybe the background? I can't really tell but I think your previous rocks looked more realistic.

Zingoo responds:

Moonstone is tricky because it's usually very milky/grey, and the blue/green shines are often under the surface, or very subtle. Thanks though! They're great practice, and I'm working on more!

[Art Mage]

Girls with glasses, always nice. This is pretty much how one can imagine an art mage.

[The Flintstones]

WIIIILLLMMMMAAAAAAA!

[Splatoon - Smeargle skin]

nice design

Diives responds:

Thanks :D

[Elizabeth]

Not bad, But keep an eye on proportions, her head is very small compared to the rest of her body.

(no not compared to her boobs, which are really huge, but thats personal opinion)

Her arms are also much longer then should be, Since she seems more to be leaning sideways then bending over.
Try some foreshortening, from the way you drew her you should see very little of the neck.
Keep in mind the way the clothing wraps around her body, her skirt doesn't seem to follow the way her leg is placed.

You made one real mistake, look next to her chin.

A fair effort, but compared with earlier work I think you can do better

Thats enough nitpicking from me, but you asked for what I thought you could improve.
Keep it up!

[Mineral paint study #3]

It looks just like a picture, but if you look a little closer you can see it's painted. It's easy to see you are a professional.

Zingoo responds:

Wow, thank you so much! I only just graduated from college, so I wouldn't call myself professional yet, but I think it's important to keep studying, keep training my eyes and artistic skills, and to always be open to learning!
That's how we all get better.

[Storm]

Beautiful!
Great use of colours. I like how you angled the horizon to add more dynamic. I like it when an illustration makes me imagine the sounds that are going on.

[Rüdiger, der große Vampir]

Looks really good, I am not familiar with Rüdiger, but it seems legit. Is that a little girl flying with the bats?

Angelus-Mortis responds:

That's actually one of the easter eggs. It's actually another vampire from a a spin off game, and he comes from a very popular series.