Djoresh's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Curl or no curl?]

Both work if you ask me.

I'd say it depends on her character. If she is more friendly i'd say curl, if she is less friendly i'd say no curl.

Side-note, are you going to change the inside of the ears? it doesn't look like a ear.

[Dark Lord]

Really nice, I like the design of the head. Though I don't really feel like he deserves the titel of a lord.
Maybe with some accessories or tatoes that signifies him as a lord.

But nothing beside that, good job!

I like the subtle blue to contrast with the red

NullMotion responds:

Thank you very much! ^_^
Yeah, i agree with you on that one, but to be honest, i wasn't really sure what to call him...

[The Undying]

Nice designs. I always side with the forgotten one

[The Vigorous]

Looks nice, I would personally switch the position order to make it visually more interresting. there are strong contrasts now.

I think I would make it: Arq - Astron - Mutt -Calor (Mirrored) -Gua - Trak

Like the idea, keep it up

Xephio responds:

Thanks. Interesting idea. Calor mirrored would indeed work better as it would create a more symmetrical composition.

[Peafox]

I like your brain.

I enjoy the composition of this illustration makes it pleasing for the eyes.

[Cellia]

Good illustration, but indeed it looks like she has no right arm.
I understand the lady is the point of interest, but maybe some more details on the camel's neck would make it fit more together.
Something about her left hand holding the reins seems off, or maybe it's the really strong contrast of the jewelry.

It's a good illustration, but it doesn't feel as a whole but individual good pieces put together.

Keep it up!

[Unexpected guest]

Diver: H-He probably only eats plankton... r-right...?

Seems like a scary dream to be in unknown territory and suddenly find yourself with an enormous creature you can never outswim.

[Fox]

Well I agree, the background is what it is. But the rest looks good.

The folds of the clothes seem to be abit out of place at some points.

The tree seems unnatural, the branches are horizontal. The branches of a tree grow abit upwards to carry more weight.

Keep in mind where you want the viewers eye to be guided to, the tree are like staight lines that cut the page in half. With some more curvey branches and sidebranches it would feel a little more smooth in my opinion

(But thats just me, I am still learning allot myself, so...)

I love the charcater design, and the little details. Good job on the bird as well.

keep it up!

graskip responds:

Now that I look at it, I should've probably did some study before drawing the background. The more I look at it, the worse it looks. The same goes for the tree.

Anyway, thanks for the review, all this advice is really helpful. I hope I'll make good use of it in the future.

[FOR THE HORDE]

Really good. I am curious what he is looking at that makes him look like that

SimonT responds:

Thanks! Haha, that's a question :D

[Don't Dream About It]

I don't rate 5 stars often but this is brilliant. The idea and the details are great. Very creative

You have to be one of the finalists.